A Romance Writer's World

When I was writing my first novel, The Dashing Debutante, I sent the first few chapters to a well-known American romance author and asked her for some feedback. She emailed me a critique of the book and told me that I had started it in the wrong place and that I needed to grab the reader’s attention with an action scene rather than the scene I had written, where my heroine was sitting on a log next to a stream, fishing and contemplating her life. I proceeded to make the changes the author suggested, and started the book with a much more dramatic scene.